I have finally finished the second sleeve for my blue linen dress. I'm hoping to have the dress ready to debut at Midwinter Coronation!

I am also hoping to get opinions on which version of documentation you think is better. I have done two, which vary slightly in aspect. The first is my project journal created through Notebook . This is more documenting the dress as a whole.
The second I wrote up in Google Documents and is just in regards to the embroidery http://docs.google.com/Doc?id=dqxd7tx_1f5g7zvgv.

I would appreciate any comments on which you think is the better format and better documentation. Thanks, Jahanara